(R but could be M) You have managed to cover everything needed but unfortunately so much of this is copied that it is not really justifiable as your own work. The information you have found is relevant in the main but as it is not yours and as it does not show me that you understand it, you cannot be graded for it. If you were to go through this and put it into your own words, you would be looking at a merit as your examples are good and the work that you have completed yourself is strong. The correct practice should be 1. Define a term or theory in your own words and then 2. Back up your definition with a quote. Your sources are then listed after the quote of footnoted at the end.
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ReplyDeleteYou have managed to cover everything needed but unfortunately so much of this is copied that it is not really justifiable as your own work. The information you have found is relevant in the main but as it is not yours and as it does not show me that you understand it, you cannot be graded for it. If you were to go through this and put it into your own words, you would be looking at a merit as your examples are good and the work that you have completed yourself is strong. The correct practice should be 1. Define a term or theory in your own words and then 2. Back up your definition with a quote. Your sources are then listed after the quote of footnoted at the end.
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